Please show me any glitches.
- Typos hide from me. They think it’s a game.
- Implausible plot twists sneak in during the night.
- Although I know enough not to let Elijah discuss helicopters or syringes, I did let “munchies” and “certifiable” slip into early drafts. My friend Ava says these jolts cause “literary whiplash.”
And if you would be so kind as to do a serious critique of a chapter, ask and ye shall receive it in MS Word format.
Who has helped?
Old friends at first. I had no idea how to write fiction, so I asked for help, and they gave it. Bless ’em.
I take credit for all the blunders in these lines, but if anything here is readable, these writers are the reason.